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A retired Welshman living in wonderful Plymouth in SW England, I’m a family man, novice sailor and boat builder, astrophotographer and motorhomer. With a passion for all things to do with education and the sea and skies above, I have a sense of adventure and innate curiosity. I write three blogs. ‘Arwen’s Meanderings’ charts my learning to sail a self-built John Welsford designed ‘Navigator’ yawl. Look out for her accompanying YouTube channel www.YouTube.com/c/plymouthwelshboy . ‘UnderSouthWestSkies’ follows my learning journey as I take up astronomy and astrophotography; a blog for beginner’s new to these hobbies, just like me. ‘Wherenexthun’, a co-written blog with my wife Maggie, shares how we ‘newbies’ get to grips with owning ‘Bryony’ an ‘Autosleeper’s Broadway EB’ motorhome, and explores our adventures traveling the UK and other parts of Europe. Come participate in one or more of our blogs. Drop us a comment, pass on a tip, share a photo. I look forward to meeting you. Take care now and have fun. Steve (and Maggie)
Showing posts with label astrophotography video writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label astrophotography video writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 14 January 2026

Technique tutorial - writing a script and shooting plan for a video short on astrophotography

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You may or may not, be aware that until recently, I ran another blog alongside this one. A very successful dinghy cruising blog about the micro adventures I had in my small boat 'Arwen' which was linked to a highly popular YouTube channel 'Arwen's Meanderings'. 

Whilst I haven't decided yet whether to start another YouTube channel on astrophotography (there are plenty of superb channels out there already, so what could I possibly add that would be useful and different), I do miss making creative video content. So, in today's post I share 

  • my plans for a 'video short' about a typical astrophotography night for me
  • a list of 'B' roll footage I need to capture for this video
I have done one or two short videos altready but they have been pretty simplistic - just a series of timelapses spliced together with a few onscreen comments. 


However, I feel it is time to go beyond this approach. A proper video with voice over and 'real-life' commentary to camera. A 'chaptered' approach that breaks down step by step the sections of a typical astrophotography night. 

So, without further ado what might I include in such a video? 


My first ever 'proper' video 'short' for YouTube

Here are my initial chapter headings for a video short which will be somewhere between 2 - 5 minutes in length:

HOOK: THE UNIVERSE IS PATIENT AND CAN ASTROPHOTOGRAPHY TAKE MOST OF THE NIGHT?

🔥 Goal: To establish wonder and cinematic tone


CHAPTER ONE: PREPARATION IN SILENCE and The Night Begins Before Nightfall

Goal: To show the planning, preparation, unpacking - setting the scene


CHAPTER TWO: ALIGNING WITH THE SKY and Waiting for Darkness

Goal: Visualize the technical alignment and focusing processes without overexplaining


CHAPTER THREE: LETTING THE NIGHT WORK and The Gear Isn’t Fancy, It’s Precise

Equipment Beauty Shots       Finding Something You Can’t See      Slewing & Plate Solving       Autoguiding

Goal: To show the slewing, plate solving and autoguiding processes along with the patience, waiting and quiet of long exposures


CHAPTER FOUR: DAWN & REVELATION

Goal: Concluding with payoff: sunrise + final image creation 


I suspect there will be a couple more chapters than this. I find that shooting video is organic and often I will suddenly shoot something I didn't initially thinkl of during the storyboarding stage. 


Tips for Filming

From  fifteen years experience of shooting over 250 dinghy cruising videos, here is my take on the key filming tips: 

  • Shoot wide + close for every key moment - you will thank yourself later during editing 
  • Use slow pans and tilts - cinematic movement sells the short and wins likes and subscribers
  • Capture longer clips than needed - can trim in video editing
  • Red light for night scenes - keeps the natural dark look
  • Timelapses: plan them early; run while shooting close-ups
  • Minimal narration for a short - let the images and sound tell the story of the night

A 'B' roll shooting clips checklist for out in the field

I always envied the creative YouTubers who could go out andf just shoot a video without recourse to a plan or storyboard. Me? I needed a checklist. there is nothing worse than coming home and discovering you have missed vital shots that tell the key aspects of the story! 

PREAMBLE INTRODUCTION: the universe is patient

o   Time lapse dusk fading to dark

o   Stars beginning to appear

o   Mount tracking in dark

o   Red headlamp glow on mount tracking

o   Dslr shutter firing

o   Red headlamp on hands adjusting scope

o   Focus on blinking LED

o   Me standing beside the rig, red light nearby

o   Slow push-in shot of the setup


PRE-PLANNING – pre trip preparation

☐ Weather app (clouds / wind) clear-skies
☐ Moon phase graphic
☐ Sky map / target selection – sky safari
☐ Notes or phone planning – sketch book
☐ Packing gear into bags; into car
☐ Batteries charging
☐ SD card insert

o   Photopills planning

o   Google maps – location hunting

o   Food being prepared and packed 

JOURNEY  – getting there

o   Car head lights dark lane

o   Pulling into car park location spot

o   Driving onto site


WAITING FOR DARK - Preparing in Silence

☐ Sunset timelapse and Blue hour sky
☐ Gear laid out in boot, untouched
☐ Watching sky quietly
☐ First stars appearing

o   Gear being unpacked in soft twilight

o   Batteries being checked, cables laid

o   Close-ups: telescope lens, mount knobs, red light

o   Sunset fading, first stars appearing

o   Inspecting tripod site

o   Reversing car into position


GEAR OVERVIEW AND SET UP -  The Gear Isn’t Fancy, It’s Precise

☐ Full rig wide shot – slow panning
☐ Refractor lens glass and reflected sky
☐ EQM-35 mount motors humming
☐ Counterweights close up
☐ DSLR mounted
☐ Cable management

o   Setting up tripod and levelling

o   Spirit levels

o   Installing batteries

o   Adding rig

o   Connecting cables

o   Balancing rig

Close ups:

o   Mount knobs

o   Asiair mini and guide scope

o   Cables – macro – plugged in sockets

o   Mount motors

o   Slow pan across entire rig

o   Cables neatly routed

o   Temp gauge 


POLAR ALIGNMENT AND FINDING THE TARGET  - Pointing the Mount at the Universe  and aligning with the sky

☐ ASIAIR polar alignment screen – record screenshots
☐ Adjusting alt/az knobs – hands close up red light
☐ North Star (if visible) and green laser pen alignment
☐ Tripod feet on ground
☐ Tightening bolts

o   ASIAIR Mini screen glowing, mount slewing

o   Camera perched on telescope

o   Moving 60d during PA

Finding Something You Can’t See

o   Plate solving confirmed screenshot

o   Target name/co-ordinates screen shot

o   Scope pointing into darkness

o   Dslr test images focus

Slewing & Plate Solving

o   Mount slewing across sky

o   Camera preview showing “empty” sky

Focus Is Everything

☐ Bahtinov mask on scope
☐ Diffraction spikes on screen
☐ Adjusting focuser
☐ Breath in cold air
☐ Locking focus

o   Appropriate screenshot recordings asiair app

o   Guide scope camera

o   Stars steady on screen

AUTOGUIDING - Letting the Mount Fix Its Own Mistakes

☐ Guide scope & camera
☐ Guiding graph stabilizing
☐ Steady guide star
☐ Mount micro-corrections

o   Dslr test images

o   Dslr test image checking – histogram

o   Inputting settings on asiair app

o   Mount tracking

o   Guide scope and guide camera

o   ASIAIR guiding graph stabilizing

o   Close-up of steady star

o   Mount making micro-corrections

o    Close up asiair


THE QUIET HOURS -  Letting the Night Work  Long, Calm Shots 

☐ Exposure countdown timer
☐ Repeating shutter clicks
☐ Milky Way / star drift
☐ Dew forming
☐ Dew heater straps and controller
☐ ASIAIR dashboard check
☐ Sitting quietly near rig
☐ Long static sky shots

o   Setting up chair and table

o   Stove boiling and Making tea

o   Sat in chair munching sandwich

o   Dew forming on grass

o   Sitting quietly near the rig

o   Checking ASIAIR dashboard

o   Clouds passing (if any)

o   Long static shots


PACKING UP – the end is in sight

☐ Dawn glow behind rig
☐ Powering down ASIAIR
☐ Removing camera
☐ Packing gear
☐ Birds / morning ambience

o   Looking over site nothing left

o   Empty space where rig once was

o   Driving out of car park

o   Boot – gear packed up, slamming boot

o   Dawn glow behind rig

o   Powering down ASIAIR

o   Removing camera from scope

o   Packing gear carefully

o   Birds beginning to chirp


OUTRO - Dawn & Revelation

☐ Empty sky at sunrise

o   First rays of light to east on horizon
☐ Horizon fade to black

o   Faint morning glow, horizon brightening

o   Packing gear slowly

o   Laptop shows final stacked image

o   Pull back to wide starry sky fading to dawn

o   Transition from dark field → computer screen → final processed image

o   Slow reveal of finished deep-sky photo


FINAL IMAGE - The Image Revealed

☐ Laptop with stacked image
☐ Histogram stretch
☐ Before / after
☐ Final processed image (full screen)

o   Different parts of SIRIL work flow

Ending visual:

o   Final deep-sky image full screen (fade out)

o   Soft text overlay: “A night under the stars”

o   Laptop with stacked image appearing

o   Before/after slider

o   Final processed deep-sky image full screen


Below you will find some images which put the above together as a checklist. I hope it helps. 

Let me know your thoughts, comments and observations in the comment box below.

In my next post, I will offer some thoughts about a possible commentary - what kind of verbal content might I focus on? 

As always, clear skies, stay safe and have fun out there. 

Steve